Help with the correct English

[Enyby]

May be better "This translation created by an automatic translator." for avoid use passive voice?

[MuNdane]

I think it sounds better with having "was created" or "is created". But if you don't think so then it's fine either way.

[Enyby]

grammarly.com advice avoid passive voice. http://www.hemingwayapp.com/ - too.

 

But I think you right.

http://www.writing.utoronto.ca/advice/style-and-editing/passive-voice

Quote

 

The actor is unknown:

    The cave paintings of Lascaux were made in the Upper Old Stone Age. [We don't know who made them.]

The actor is irrelevant:

    An experimental solar power plant will be built in the Australian desert. [We are not interested in who is building it.]

 

I think this is same case.

[Enyby]

Added setting 'saved list updates interval'.
Add setting 'freeze interval'.
Improved speed hack.
Improved sort of app list.
Improved region detection.
Improved daemon freeze.
Ignore zombie processes.
Changed defaults for memory editor output format.
Added prompt for improve auto translation.
Updated translations.
Fixed bugs.

 

[MuNdane]

I'm only assuming that since you posted the change log here that you are looking for corrections...

 

"Added prompt to improve auto translation."

 

or

 

"Added prompt for improving auto translation."

 

Also...

"Added setting 'freeze interval'."

Edited November 21, 2016 by MuNdane

[Enyby]

Yes. It need correction. But this in past. We already released new version. No correction need at this time.

 

And you right: "Added prompt for improving auto translation."

[MuNdane]

Alright, sorry for the late response.

[Enyby]

<string name="oneplus_fix">Use fix. Or manually set __oneplus_fix_1__ in __oneplus_fix_2__ and reboot your device.</string>

 

[MuNdane]

I don't see anything incorrect about that post.

[Enyby]

	<string name="disable_floating_windows">Disable the floating windows and restart app</string>
	<string name="enable_floating_windows">Enable the floating windows and restart app</string>

 

[MuNdane]

It looks correct to me

[geribaldi]

@Skullboyq you can paste the text in apk editor for better formatting

 

 

[Skullboyq]

2 minutes ago, geribaldi said:

@Skullboyq you can paste the text in apk editor for better formatting

 

 

Wow what are u using, my text editor makes it all scrambled and just like somebody vomitted text.

[geribaldi]

Look into our apk section. There a app...

Haaaa, i forgot we have now unlimited upload traffic. I forced d2 to that

 

Its a epic app you can nearly everything edit in a apk file. Xml, smali and db files

APK_Editor_Pro_v1.7.0_[Paid]-1.apk

 

 

Ther are a lot good editors on playstore for programmers too

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added 2 minutes later

You need to install it with lucky patcher to bypass licence check. 

 

Go to kompilieren und installieren in lp. Nicht normal installieren

[geribaldi]

Or download jota+ its a very powerfull editor patch it with uret patcher. Enyby dont need to reformatting it if you edit his xml with that.

 

He can send you the beta apk, you can edit and recompile it and send that to him

Uret_Patcher_v1.14.apk