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I do not know English well.
Therefore, the texts will be prior published in the broken English here. Everyone can correct the text. In the future, this text will be used in the application.

 

Text can be big. You do need correct all of it. If you find mistake you can write about that even if you do not check all other parts.

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	<string name="search_helper">Search helper:</string>
	<string name="off">Off</string>
	<string name="go_to_game">Go to the game, if found a lot</string>
	<string name="go_to_game_and_restore">Go to the game, if found a lot and restore the search mode on next open</string>
	<string name="nothing">Nothing</string>
	<string name="sort">Just sort</string>
	<string name="sort_and_remove_duplicates">Sort and remove duplicates</string>
	<string name="help_basics_title">Basic information</string>
	<string name="help_basics">"After start the application, by clicking the \"__start__\" button, a floating icon appear on the screen. It can be dragged to any location.
Short tap on the icon will open the main application interface, long tap - show panel for change speed of the game.
In the main dialog are:
* In the upper left corner - the icon of the game. Tap on it allows you to select another game.
* In the center are located bookmarks to navigate through the tabs. Tap on the desired bookmark displays the appropriate tab.
Total 4 tabs: settings, search, saved list and the memory editor.
* In the upper right corner of the interface is the closing button. Press it and the interface will be hidden, and a floating icon appear on the screen.
* At the bottom of the screen is a status bar application and the eye icon. If you press and hold on the eye icon, the interface becomes transparent, as long as you do not release your finger.
* The rest of the contents of the screen depends on which tab you're on.

On each tab, except for the settings tab, there is a menu button, which contains a variety of possible actions. In it you will find the main actions for this tab.

Settings tab contains a variety of settings, help, information about the application and exit button.

Search tab contains:
* Pause button, the name of the game, the number of results found and the refresh button.
* Below is a panel with quick access icons and a menu button. All icons are duplicated on the menu, so if you do not know the values of the icons, it can always be viewed by clicking on the menu button (the rightmost).
* Everything else took the list of search results.

Saved list tab contains:
* Pause button, the name of the selected application, the menu button and  the refresh button.
* Everything else took the list with the saved values.

Memory editor tab is similar to the previous, only here instead of a list of saved values displayed memory contents.

In all three lists (the search results, saved values and memory editor), you can perform a long tap on the items for show the context menu."</string>
	<string name="daemon_killed">"Daemon killed by something.

Usually it can be:
1. Any memory killers or optimizers. You must disable any killers or add __app_name__ to white list in its.
2. System killer on out of memory. Set \"__data_in_ram__\" to \"__no__\", do not use heavy apps, unload all other unused apps, try use __app_name__ after reboot device.
"</string>

 

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26 minutes ago, Enyby said:


 

 

I'd love to Translate but i cannot edit anything :(

 

 

	<string name="search_helper">Search helper:</string>
	<string name="off">Off</string>
	<string name="go_to_game">Go to the game, if found a lot</string>
	<string name="go_to_game_and_restore">Go to the game, if found a lot and restore the search mode on next open</string>
	<string name="nothing">Nothing</string>
	<string name="sort">Just sort</string>
	<string name="sort_and_remove_duplicates">Sort and remove duplicates</string>
	<string name="help_basics_title">Basic information</string>
	<string name="help_basics">"After start the application, by clicking the \"__start__\" button, a floating icon appear on the screen. It can be dragged to any location.
Short tap on the icon will open the main application interface, long tap - show panel for change speed of the game.
In the main dialog are:
* In the upper left corner - the icon of the game. Tap on it allows you to select another game.
* In the center are located bookmarks to navigate through the tabs. Tap on the desired bookmark displays the appropriate tab.
Total 4 tabs: settings, search, saved list and the memory editor.
* In the upper right corner of the interface is the closing button. Press it and the interface will be hidden, and a floating icon appear on the screen.
* At the bottom of the screen is a status bar application and the eye icon. If you press and hold on the eye icon, the interface becomes transparent, as long as you do not release your finger.
* The rest of the contents of the screen depends on which tab you're on.

On each tab, except for the settings tab, there is a menu button, which contains a variety of possible actions. In it you will find the main actions for this tab.

Settings tab contains a variety of settings, help, information about the application and exit button.

Search tab contains:
* Pause button, the name of the game, the number of results found and the refresh button.
* Below is a panel with quick access icons and a menu button. All icons are duplicated on the menu, so if you do not know the values of the icons, it can always be viewed by clicking on the menu button (the rightmost).
* Everything else took the list of search results.

Saved list tab contains:
* Pause button, the name of the selected application, the menu button and  the refresh button.
* Everything else took the list with the saved values.

Memory editor tab is similar to the previous, only here instead of a list of saved values displayed memory contents.

In all three lists (the search results, saved values and memory editor), you can perform a long tap on the items for show the context menu."</string>
	<string name="daemon_killed">"Daemon killed by something.

Usually it can be:
1. Any memory killers or optimizers. You must disable any killers or add __app_name__ to white list in its.
2. System killer on out of memory. Set \"__data_in_ram__\" to \"__no__\", do not use heavy apps, unload all other unused apps, try use __app_name__ after reboot device.
"</string>
Edited by Skullboyq
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@Skullboyq It is not translation. It is correction.

Forum editor is very bad I know that. try copy all to text file and attach to forum.

 

Do not use quote button at all. Try copy text by select - copy - paste - edit.

 

And try use Chrome browser. Devs of forums support only it. Unfortunately.

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You can write in any form. For example:

 

Change "Any memory killers or optimizers" to "Any the memory killers or optimizers".

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1 minute ago, Enyby said:

@Skullboyq It is not translation. It is correction.

Forum editor is very bad I know that. try copy all to text file and attach to forum.

 

Do not use quote button at all. Try copy text by select - copy - paste - edit.

 

And try use Chrome browser. Devs of forums support only it. Unfortunately.

Oh yeah. I'll Try

 

I use Chrome Browser but on Mobile, Site Bugs sometimes with Quotes especially.

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16 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

Oh yeah. I'll Try

 

I use Chrome Browser but on Mobile, Site Bugs sometimes with Quotes especially.

Click quote by accident you cannot remove the quote on mobile phone. Annoying... 

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Corrected some that i knew were 100% right.

 

My Upper/Lower Case Knowledge in English is not 100% Accurate, maybe a native speaker can improve it

 

I have marked things i do not understand from context as (?) 

Maybe you can tell me what you ment.

 

For now this is my progress, i will take a look at it now and finish it, if i don't finish it i will tommorow

Correction.txt

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@NoFear Use nick insertion instead. It can not break editor. Click on @ near nickname for paste.

 

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<string name="go_to_game">Go to the game, if found a lot(?)</string>

If count found bigger from count to show then GG hide and you return to game. "a lot" mean "very many".
<string name="go_to_game_and_restore">Go to the game, if found a lot and restore the search mode on next open(?)</string>

Same as above but after auto hide if you open GG then auto opened last search dialog (exact or fuzzy).

 

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* At the bottom of the screen there is a status bar application(?) and the eye icon.

 

Last line in GG with data:

scr_1479078904.png

 

 

 

 

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All icons are duplicated on the menu, so if you do not know the values of the icons, it can always be viewed by clicking on the menu button (the rightmost)(Upper Right?)

 

Menu button always in right. And always last from left or first from right:

scr_1479079022.png

 

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* Everything else took the list of search results(?).

 

All other place used for search list results.

 

 

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* Everything else took the list with the saved values(?).

 

Same as above.

 

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21 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

My Upper/Lower Case Knowledge in English is not 100% Accurate, maybe a native speaker can improve it

I think this does not matter. I need correct spelled English. Case does not matter.

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	<string name="bad_settings">Bad settings</string>
	<string name="freeze_lags">Using freeze values together with the setting __hide_from_game__ can cause lag in the game.</string>	

 

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Go to the game, if found a lot (?)

[Found a lot of what]

Go to the game, if found a lot and restore the search mode on next open(?)

[Found a lot of what, restore search Mode?]

In the main dialog are(?)

[What do you mean by Dialog?]

At the bottom of the screen there is a status bar application(?)

[Status Bar Application?]

so if you do not know the values of the icons(?)

[Values of Icons?]

(the rightmost)

[Righthand Side? Upper Right? Rightmost i think isn't the right Word in that Context]

 Everything else took the list of search results(?)

Everything else took the list with the saved values(?).

[What do you mean by took, is taken over by?]

 

 

 

 

Disclaimer: I'm not trying to bash your English knowledge and make you looks bad, i just didn't understand these and couldn't correct.

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I am not a Native Speaker, i think my English in General should be good but when it comes to Upper/Lowercase i am mostly unreliable.

 

Nevertheless i don't know if this is perfect but atleast it should be better than the first.

here is the Correction of Correction.txt, 

Correction.txt

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2 minutes ago, Enyby said:

	<string name="bad_settings">Bad settings</string>
	<string name="freeze_lags">Using freeze values together with the setting __hide_from_game__ can cause lag in the game.</string>	

Bad Settings (Correct)

Using freeze Values together with the Setting __hide_from_game__ can cause lag in the Game. (Correct)

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1 minute ago, Skullboyq said:

[Found a lot of what]

Search results. Memory values.

1 minute ago, Skullboyq said:

[Found a lot of what, restore search Mode?]

Same as above. Restore search mode mean: you click GG icon and open GG interface with opened dialog for search. Like this:

scr_1479080197.png

2 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

[What do you mean by Dialog?]

Main GG interface:

scr_1479080249.png

3 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

[Status Bar Application?]

Status line of GG:

scr_1479078904.png

4 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

[Values of Icons?]

What mean concrete icon on toolbar:

scr_1479079022.png

5 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

[Righthand Side? Upper Right? Rightmost i think isn't the right Word in that Context]

Last from left to right. Icon placed last from left to right in toolbar:

scr_1479079022.png

6 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

[What do you mean by took, is taken over by?]

Place (space) occupied by. All other place (space) used for...

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20 minutes ago, Enyby said:

* At the bottom of the screen there is a status bar application(?) and the eye icon.

 

Last line in GG with data:

scr_1479078904.png

 

 

 

 

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All icons are duplicated on the menu, so if you do not know the values of the icons, it can always be viewed by clicking on the menu button (the rightmost)(Upper Right?)

 

Menu button always in right. And always last from left or first from right:

scr_1479079022.png

 

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* Everything else took the list of search results(?).

 

All other place used for search list results.

 

 

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* Everything else took the list with the saved values(?).

 

Same as above.

 

*I'd say only "there is a Status Bar and the Eye Icon"

 

*Correct, my mistake, still thinkink of Old GG where it was on Upper Right.

 

*Everything else is taken over by ....

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Just now, Enyby said:

Empty..

 

9 minutes ago, Skullboyq said:

 

 

Go back to the Game, if a lot of Values are found

 

Go back to the Game, if a lot of Value are found and restore the Search mode on next open

 

In the main Screen you can see

 

At the bottom of the screen there is a Status Bar 

 

I'm guessing just "Icons" or "line/array of Icons"

 

Already answered. My mistake.

 

 Answered too

Right Sentence

 Everything else is taken over bythe List of Search results

Everything else is taken over by the List of saved Values.

 

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